Wednesday, April 4, 2012

New story/ Hiding From Royalty part 1

I was sitting on a rock when my sister Isabella came and sat beside me.

"Hannah, why do we live in the mountains "?
"To hide from king John" I answered
All of the sudden a chariot came up to our house.
Dad came running out.
"O no" yelled dad
"Girls, get inside ".
The two girls ran inside.
They peeked out the window.
A knight was heading for the door!
He opened the door and grabbed Isabella,s long brown hair.
Me and my parents ran outside crying.
"Hannah, go get my sack of gold" demanded dad
I ran inside and got his gold.
"Here dad".
"Were are you going"?
"To get Isabella".
He got on a horse.

Will Isabella ever get home?
Will the knights take her dad as a slave?
To be continued .


  1. I'm excited to continue this story:)

  2. I agree with Kathryn. Great beginning!

  3. I am getting ready to do my part, so I am reading the whole story! :) This was really good!